Some people think that universities should provide graduates with knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge for it's own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What in your opinion, should be the main function of a university.

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some individuals are of the
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that universities should
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of
knowledge
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and
skills
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needed for graduates in the
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environment, others may
also
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be of the opinion that
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the most important function of the university should provide access to
knowledge
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regardless
whether
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of whether
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the
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content is valuable to an employer. In view of
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my truest opinion will be for the school to provide both
knowledge
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and
skills
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to help integrate properly into working environments.
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with, the idea
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considering
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this
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situation is that relevant
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content related to the job of choice should be provided to graduates.
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, a
graduate
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whose intention is to
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in the health sector
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provided with relevant
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outlines that will help them gain
knowledge
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for practice once they
graduate
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.
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, another point to pay attention to is the soft
skills
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one needs to
work
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seemlessly
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seamlessly
as a
graduate
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in
work
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environments. These soft
skills
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may include
communication
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skills
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. These are
skills
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that must come in handy to every
graduate
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these days.
Communication
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skills
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will help in conveying and receiving
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appropriately.
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, it is common
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that once
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information
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is
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one would have to wait for feedback before proceeding to act on something. Proper
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to
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research has proven to reduce conflicts.
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,
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technology in recent times has helped to make
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easy in the
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environment
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in storing
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, analysing
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, and computing
data
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.
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,
knowledge
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on
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Excel helps financial
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analysts
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to compute large
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and
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it to give money
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that will help make future projections.
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, my stance for tertiary education should comprise
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knowledge
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and
skills
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to help graduates integrate well into various areas so as to enable them to be more efficient and productive. Education should include relevant
course
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content,
communication
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skills
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, and
information
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technology
skills
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.

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task
State your view clearly in one line at the start and keep it in the essay.
structure
Plan your essay. Use three parts: intro, body, and conclusion. Put one main idea in each body paragraph.
language
Use simple and clear sentences. Break long ideas into two small lines.
coherence
Link ideas with clear ties. Use words like first, next, and for example to show how ideas go together.
content
Give a real example that fits the point you make, so the idea has weight.
idea
The essay shows a clear view that both knowledge and skills are needed.
content
You give good examples about soft skills and IT.
coherence
You use linking words to show flow.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • Lifelong learning
  • Holistic development
  • Vocational training
  • Industry-specific competencies
  • Critical thinking
  • Creative problem-solving
  • Academic research
  • Intellectual development
  • Ethics and values
  • Societal contribution
  • Job market demands
  • Practical training
  • Internships
  • Knowledge advancement
  • Global challenges
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