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Writing Samples
Band 2.5

The working week shoud be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that
the
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working time is important in
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a worker
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worker
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worker's
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 life.
While
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 there are many rest days
in
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at
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weekend
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the weekend
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, there are
also
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som
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some
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lrawloacks
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loopholes
 to consider. I tend to agree with the former argument
to
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that
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thw
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the
 working week and worker
weekend
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 should be
change
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.
To begin
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shorter
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a shorter
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 week gives more rest, less stress, and
good
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a good
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 mood to focus
at
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 work. In other
word
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, when
it
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there
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get
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are
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less
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fewer
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the
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people who work will
relaxing
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relax
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 and do their job on time with good
quialty
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quality
 and
becomes
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become
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pordctivey
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productive
. In
addtions
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addition
,
long
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the long
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weekend
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 will impact to
nation
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nation's
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economic
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economy
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through
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as
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 they spend more money
in
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on
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purches
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purchasing
 goods and services.
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, in Poland
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, who
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who workers
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workers who
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work-days less
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work fewer days
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then
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than
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other
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in other
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countriy
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countries
 get higher
in comptions
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compensation
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per
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as
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cent
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a percentage
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in
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 GDP. Another point to consider, some jobs need longer work hours, and with
shoter
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shorter
week-days
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weekdays
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 will get
effict nagitivlty
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effective negatively
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such
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 as
;
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 costs to business rise
;
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 service hours and global teams may suffer.
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,
doctors
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doctors'
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works
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work
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 should be on 24 hours to save people's
life
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lives
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 in
emergncy
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emergency
 cases. In
concluison
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conclusion
, despite people having
diffrent
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different
 views, I support a shorter week with a longer
weekend
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 in many cases, but not for all jobs; policy should fit the field and allow gradual change.

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task response
Make the start clear: say if you agree or not in one clear line.
coherence
Give one main idea per paragraph and explain it well.
content
Use facts that you know are true or easy to see, and fix wrong facts.
structure
End with a clear wrap up that restates your view.
grammar
Check word use and spell to make a clean text.
content
The choice and stance are easy to see.
coherence
Some linking words are used well.
structure
There are clear paragraphs.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • agree
  • disagree
  • shorter
  • longer
  • week
  • weekend
  • rest
  • health
  • stress
  • happiness
  • focus
  • job
  • work
  • time
  • people
  • cost
  • money
  • change
  • plan
  • trial
  • balance
  • family
  • sleep
  • energy
  • day
  • days
  • hours
  • business
  • life
  • career
  • break
  • free time
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