Some persons prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however think that change is a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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view
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are varries
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about doing the thing for
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livelihood
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some
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thinks
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same
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routie
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other says change is life.
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essay will discuss both
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opinions
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peoples
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feel safe with
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as there is less hassle in
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it makes
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structure
Plan your essay before you write. Decide your view and the main ideas you will talk about.
introduction
Write a short intro that states your view and what you will discuss.
coherence
Begin each paragraph with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to join ideas.
language
Use only easy, common words and check spelling and grammar.
content
You try to talk about both sides of the topic.
structure
There is some effort to share a view.
Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • stay the same
  • routine life
  • security
  • comfort
  • familiar
  • risk
  • learn
  • change
  • grow
  • progress
  • adapt
  • skills
  • job
  • life
  • plan
  • balance
  • decision
  • opinion
  • conclusion
  • discuss
  • view
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