The line graph shows the sales of gold in Dubai for 12 months in 2002 in millions of Dirhams. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the
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of gold revenues in the city of Dubai in the whole year of 2002. The currency used is dirhams.
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, we can see that March had the highest
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of
sales
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,
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both July and September had the lowest
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the data shown, the amount of gold that was sold at the start of the period was 200
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; the
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increased by around 30
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in February and even more in March, reaching 350
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, making it the best-selling month in the timeline given.
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, in April, the purchases decreased to 250
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, and by 50
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100
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in May and June, respectively.
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, in July, the gold markets sold almost 130, but
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in August, the
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rose to 200. Unfortunately, the
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declined by around 70
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from the previous month.
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, in the rest of the months, October, November and December, the
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remained stable and above 150
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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