In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or phone. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

It is believed that in the future
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world,
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many
people
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might not be able to pay using
cash
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,
while
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the only way for
payments
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apply
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things in shops will be
made
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apply
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by
cridt
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credit
card
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of
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or
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phone. From my
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perspective
, I
frimly
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firmly
believe
that is
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not going to happen soon, and some
people
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may be unhappy to deal with
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card
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a card
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instad
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instead
of
cash
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. I would argue that
cash
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might not
disapper
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disappear
soon
and
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, and
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the reason is that the states in
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developing
countries could not give up on
cash
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.
the
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method of other
payments way
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payment ways
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is not
avalible
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available
.
For instance
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, many
countries
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countries'
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side
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sides
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are not able to
proved
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provide
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payments may have to be made by
card
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or phone
due to
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cotsly
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costly
price
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prices
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,
while
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in the same amount of
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mony
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money
can be helpful in other
way
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ways
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like
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, like
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improve
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improving
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their shops or
bring
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bringing
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more products to
incerase
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increase
the
sallings
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sales
.
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, many owner shops argue that the company of the
cridt
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credit
card
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demand many
recuarment
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requirements
to get one, and it
did
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does
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not make a lot of
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mony
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money
. One major reason why I argue that
people
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will not give up using
cash
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is
many
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that many
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poeple
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people
do not prefer using
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card
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cards
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and think it is not safe to keep all
your
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their
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mony
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money
in the bank. To illustrate, older adults who trust the local banks and keep their
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mony
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money
on
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in
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it, they
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lost
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all of it when the war
satrted
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started
and the government
regiured
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regulated
many local banks to
lond
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lend
them a huge amount of
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mony
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money
. After the war
nether
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neither
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the policy makers nor banks could return the
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mony
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money
because
the
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of the
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losses, so the
majorty
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majority
of old
people
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might not trust to bay using
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card
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a card
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and tend to deal with
cash
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.
Moreover
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, many
individulas
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individuals
like
cash
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because it
proved
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provides
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a sense of
awar
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awareness
when we use it,
for example
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, some young generation who pay using
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card
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a card
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or phone do not have a high level of
consius
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consciousness
of spending
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mony
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money
, and they
could not
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cannot
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be keen
while
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paing
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paying
things
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for things
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. In conclusion, I would argue that using
cash
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may not
disappre
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disappear
soon because
many
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of many
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factor
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factors
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.
However
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, with the
rapidly
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rapid
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development
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development,
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it
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there
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may be
less
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fewer
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users of
cash
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cashless society
  • digital payment systems
  • financial institutions
  • transparency
  • illegal activities
  • privacy reasons
  • digital trace
  • technologically challenged
  • cybersecurity threats
  • technical failures
  • cultural attachments
  • resistant to change
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