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The bar chart shows the average gasoline prices in selected countries in June 2020. (in US dollars) . Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart compares the
avarage
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average
 prices of
gasoline
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 in different countries in June 2020.
Overall
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, what stands out from the chart is that
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the avarage
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avarage
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average
gasoline
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 price in
Italay
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Italy
 was the
highest
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highest,
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while
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cost
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the cost
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 of
gasoline
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 in the US was the lowest. Of all countries, in Italy, the price of
gasoline
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 was the highest,
with
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at
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 1.56 US
dollars
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. In terms of
cost
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 in France and Germany
was
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were
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 a bit
same
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the same
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, with 1.47 and 1.43 US
dollars
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 respectively. The value of
gasoline
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 in the UK was much better than
Spain
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in Spain
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, with 1.34 and 1.26 in that order. When it comes to
price
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the price
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 of
gasoline
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 in Japan, Canada and
US
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the US
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 was lower compared to other countries.
Gasoline
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cost
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costs
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 1.21
dollars
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 in Japan. The
cost
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 of
gasoline
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 in Canada was a bit higher than
US
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US,
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made up
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at
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 0.76 and 0.55 US
dollars
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gasoline, cost, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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