the charts gives the information about two ggenre of tv shows watched by men and women and 4 diferent age groups in australia. the charts gives the information about two ggenre of tv shows watched by men and women and 4 diferent age groups in australia.

The two bar charts illustrate the number of different age groups of females and males who watch two kinds of series in the country of Australia.
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, we can see that the percentage of women surpasses
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;
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,
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people
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age
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45 and above were watching the most in the period given.
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the data shown, individuals who enjoy reality shows were mostly girls; the ratio of citizens from 16 to 24 was around 51%;
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, it increased to 60% for
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from 25 to 34 and even more for 34-44 and 45+, reaching
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67% and 69%, respectively.
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, for the game documentaries, the boys' proportion was higher than
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; it is noticeable that teenagers to adults
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50%, but it decreased
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to 38% for mature people. As for the early middle-aged, it was at 40%; surprisingly, the population was at 70%.

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