The line graphs below show the subscriptions to mobile and fixed phone lines in four different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two line graphs illustrate mobile

phone

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and fixed telephone

subscriptions

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per hundred

citizents

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citizens

in Eritrea, India,

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the UK

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and Uruguay from 2005 to 2015.

Overall

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, it is clearly seen that all countries experienced an upward trend for

phone

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subscriptions

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although

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, for fixed mobile devices, each

contrie

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country

had a different line graph. In more detail, telephone

subscriptions

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in Uruguay increased threefold, from just below 50 to around 150, per hundred individuals and hit a peak in 2013 at

aproximately

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approximately

170.

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, in fixed

phone

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subscriptions

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subscriptions,

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the trend remained flat with a small dip.

Indias electronic's

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India's electronic

show examples

subscriptions

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also

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showed an

overall

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increase, from just over 0 to around 80.

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However

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However,

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in fixed telephone

subscriptions

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, India experienced a gradual decrease.

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, electronic device subscription in the UK rose and

then

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levelled off at

aproximately

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approximately

120

subscriptions

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per hundred individuals.

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, fixed

phone

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subscriptions

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in the UK steadily decreased, from just below 60

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2005 to around 50 in 2015.

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, in

Eritrea

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Eritrea,

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both

subscriptions

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remained low and flat at all times, reaching slightly above 0.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words phone, subscriptions with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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175 words

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