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The graph below shows the production levels of the main kinds of fuel in the UK between 1981 and 2000.Summarize the formation byselectingand reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph depicts the amount of natural fuel produced in the United Kingdom from 1981 to 2000.
Overall
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, petroleum
reamined
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remained
 the most processed energy source,
whereas
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 the amount of production of coal
descended
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declined
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 and natural
surpassed
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gas surpassed
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 coal manufacture in due course of time. Petrol showed a promising growth, starting from about 90 in 1981, reaching
to
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around 40 in 1986.
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,
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 it had a negative curve between 1987 to 1995 with
lowest
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the lowest
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 production of 100 in 1991, the graph kept on increasing
hitting
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 a peak of approximately 150 by 2000,
thereafter
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. Coal
with
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, with
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 close competition with the extraction of petrol at 80
in
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at
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 the beginning of
1981
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1981,
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 plunged in the next couple of years, hitting a bottom of around 35.
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, the proceeding increment in
the
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production resulted in 60 by 1996 and
then
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 a slow decrement was
notice
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,
untill
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until
 it came back to 35 in the year 2000.
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, natural gas that was made in the least quantity of approximately 35
in
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at
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 the start of 1981, followed a steady
ascend
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ascent
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 and almost
tripple
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triple
 by the end of the two decades
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, hitting
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hitting
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reaching
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 its best of little over 100 in 2000.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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