IELTS The diagram below shows the process of recycling household waste into new products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the multi-stage process by which
recycle
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recycled
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trash
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is transformed into new products.
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, the process consists of nine
stages
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, beginning with throwing the
trash
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in
recycle
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the recycling
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box and ending with the
producing
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production of
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final
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the final
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recycle
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recycled
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product.
Initially
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, people throw the
trash
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in
recycle
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the recycling
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box
and
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this
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trash
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is prepared through several
stages
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.
Recycle
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Recycled
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trashes are
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trash is
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first moved to
recycling
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the recycling
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centre for sorting, after which
trashes are
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trash is
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compressed into blocks.
Subsequently
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, these blocks undergo preparation, as they are crushed to
washing
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. These
stages
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convert
trash
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into
the
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apply
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washed plastic, which is ready for
further
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processing. In the subsequent
stages
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, the material is refined and transformed. It is than processed to producing plastic pellets, which are
then
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these plastic pellets are heated to form raw material.
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, these raw materials are produced
end
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products.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words trash, stages with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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