Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

Dear

sir

Fix capitalization

Sir

show examples

madam

Fix capitalization

Madam

show examples

, I am writing

this

Linking Words

letter regarding the

fairwell

Correct your spelling

farewell

for Mr Johnson. I am thinking about some unique venues as compared to the ordinary

one's

Check wording

ones

show examples

According to

Linking Words

me, the suitable date for the party is

public

Correct article usage

a public

show examples

holiday

which

Punctuation problem

, which

show examples

is 25 September

because

Punctuation problem

, because

show examples

this

Linking Words

day

Use synonyms

all the employees can enjoy with their family members as everyone has a

Use synonyms

day

Remove the redundancy

apply

show examples

day

Use synonyms

off. The timing for the party should be in the afternoon as compared to

evening

Correct article usage

the evening

show examples

, because mostly the employees are working

Correct article usage

the next

show examples

day

Use synonyms

. Well, I think the suitable venue for the party must be near the

work

Replace the word

workplace

show examples

as it is convenient for workers to come. The

restaurent

Correct your spelling

restaurant

'Grill and Bar' would be suitable as it is spacious and holds the gathering

upto

Use the right word

up to

show examples

100 - 150 people.

Moreover

Linking Words

, if

Fix capitalization

show examples

talk about the food,

this

Linking Words

restaurant provides both vegetarian and

non- vegetarian

Use the right word

non-vegetarian

show examples

cousins

Check wording

cuisines

show examples

. I checked the review of an

individuals

Fix the agreement mistake

individual

show examples

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

it is

4.5 rated

Correct your spelling

a 4.5-rated

restaurent

Correct your spelling

restaurant

in our town.

Additionally

Linking Words

, the music system is

also

Linking Words

available so we can enjoy

while

Linking Words

dancing

as well as

Linking Words

the concerts are organised in

this

Linking Words

restaurent

Correct your spelling

restaurant

every

tuesday

Fix capitalization

Tuesday

show examples

luckily

Punctuation problem

. Luckily

show examples

, on September 25, the

day

Use synonyms

is Tuesday. I hope you consider my suggestions

and

Punctuation problem

, and

show examples

if you need more

information

Punctuation problem

information,

show examples

feel free to

contanct

Correct your spelling

contact

me. Your faithfully, Reet

aksandhu0597

Dec 19, 2025

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

grammar

Fix the spelling and word use. Watch common miss spells like farewell, restaurant, contact, up to.

structure

Make the plan clear in three parts: date/time, place, and food/entertainment. Use a new line for each part.

structure

Put one idea in each line or in a new paragraph to make the text easy to read.

content

Give a clear time (like 2 pm) and check that the date falls on a real day of the year.

tone

Keep a formal tone. Start with Dear Sir or Madam and end with a proper closing such as Yours faithfully or Yours sincerely.

content

You cover all the main points: date, place, food, and fun.

tone

You use a formal opening and closing.

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

7
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

214 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. Thank your friend for staying with them tell them what you enyoed about the holiday explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter.
I hope this letter finds you in good health and spirit.I am writing this letter to express my feelings about our last holiday at your place.
7
band
an increasing number of people choose to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people want to change the way they look? And Is it a positive or negative development?
The rising popularity of beauty aid surgery for presence enhancement has become a prominent trend in a cutting-edge social era. In my opinion, it is caused by gaining confidence, while the development of people's looks is positive due to health reasons and career advancement.
6
band
There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.
Living in the big cities could be a big dream to vast majority of people, while some of them stand opposite this idea. This essay will try to identify the positive and negative side of this topic.
6
band
Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creative than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.
It is said by some people that some children who play interesting games can improve their skills and this is much better than studying. Personally, I totally agree with this notion because by doing interesting exercises with children, parents can make them enhance their potential and it is much more fun.
6
band
In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, people stored knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
In the previous decade, people captured knowledge in books. However, in today's digital age, most individuals believe that knowledge is contained on the social networking site. It is the writer who strongly supports that the benefits of a variety of valuable knowledge and constant access to information on the internet far outweigh the drawbacks of illegal and misleading information.

Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter suggest a suitable date and time for the party recommend a venue propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

You recently had a holiday visiting your friends and you stayed in their house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter. Thank your friend for staying with them tell them what you enyoed about the holiday explain you are sending photos of the holiday with the letter.

an increasing number of people choose to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why do people want to change the way they look? And Is it a positive or negative development?

There is a big number of people who wish to live in big cities. Write an essay to an educated reader to discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in big cities. Include reasons and any relevant examples to support your answer.

Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creative than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer.

In the past, knowledge was stored in books. Today, people stored knowledge on the internet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?