The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present

The map illustrates the Ryemouth village development in 1995 compared to the present day.
Overall
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, the area is transformed from a traditional countryside layout into
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a modernized
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modernized
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apartment complex with several recreational facilities. Previously, the area on the north-east side consisted of farmland with
adjacent
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forest park, which was replaced by golf and tennis courts. Across
to
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from
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them, the housing estate is now expanded towards the west side, connected to the road around the old housing area.
In
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the road junction,
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the cafe remains unchanged, the hotel across from it has a new addition of
car
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a car
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park next to it.
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the shops existed
on
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in
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the south-west in the past, they
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transformed into restaurants.
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, a row of fish market is converted into apartment buildings. Ultimately, the fishing port on the southernmost part was demolished, leaving the beach looking emptier nowadays.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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