The pie chart shows average monthly student expenditure in the UK in 2016. The bar chart shows sources of student income in the same year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Many kids have experienced a big competition in the

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environment.

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different groups of people may think

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impacts children badly, others believe it boosts motivation. The two sides of

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argument will be analysed and discussed in

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essay.

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, a constant pressure can lead to a lack of

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and some mental problems. To illustrate, if a kid who is artistic and creative is being compared to a more athletic individual, unrealistic

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standards

are set. Sadly, both of these students may lose the passion they have for their hobbies and only concentrate

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the high

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standards

teachers and parents have set.

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,

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can lead to confidence problems and induce depression, as they are under the impression that they are not good enough.

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,

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pressure can

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work as

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encouragement to achieve more.

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, in my previous school, most of the students were not keen on studies. I did not have the need to prove myself to others

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, my motivation to study

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decreasen

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decreased

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went to study

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Gymnasium

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, I was

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surrounded

by fascinated and hard-working students

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, in order to fit in, I had to improve my learning skills. In conclusion,

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competitive environment encouraged me to do more and

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achieve

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higher grades. To

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summarise

, both sides of

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argument have

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strong support.

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, I believe that

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pressure is rather good, because it is a great source of motivation, but it is important to learn how to deal with

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as it can be used poorly and be a cause

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of

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many health problems.