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The bar chart below shows data on top four coffee producing countries in the world from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The bar chart below shows data on top four coffee producing countries in the world from 2011 to 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The bar chart presents information about the amount of
coffee
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 production in Brazil, Vietnam, Indonesia and Colombia during a three-year period , including 2011, 2012 and 2013.(numbers are in 1000 units) In general,
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 Brazil had the biggest proportion in producing
coffee
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 among them, Colombia was the smallest producer of
coffee
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 from 2011 to 2013. In 2011, the amount of
coffee
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 produced in Brazil was approximately 43000 before reaching just above 50000 in 2012. In the following year, it dropped again to almost 49000. Vietnam
coffee
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 production was at almost 23000, 22000 and 28000 in 2011, 2012 and 2013, respectively. Indonesia's bar chart shows an upward trend starting at just below 10000 , reaching 11000 in 2013. The same pattern was seen in Colombia, when it was at 8000 in 2011 , which led to almost 12000 in 2013.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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