The graphs provide information about worldwide energy consumption, the countries with oil reserves and the world oil prices from 2000 to 2025.

The line graph illustrates the consumption of worldwide energy in the United States from 1980 to 2030. Units are measured in quadrillion units.
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, it is readily apparent that despite their inclining trend throughout the observed period, hydropower, solar/wind, and nuclear consumption remained in the low range, compared to other categories, which
also
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showed
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trend. In the first half of the period, petrol oil experienced moderate fluctuations, before gradually rising and
reached
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its peak
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almost 50
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of the year. 
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, natural gas and coal started at 20 and 15, respectively. Afterwards, both showed
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increasing trend and converged at several points throughout the years, before peaking in the
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year. As for the hydropower, solar or wind, and nuclear fuels, they stood exactly at the same point of just below 5 in 1980.
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nuclear showed a stable growth throughout the years, the other two categories rose and fell
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intermittently
until 2005. From that point onwards, the solar or wind fuel was rising steadily, parallel to nuclear fuel,
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the hydropower remained largely unchanged at around 3.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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