The line graph below shows the oil production and consumption in China between 1982 and 2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the
amount
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(millions of
oil
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barrels) of
oil
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that China produced and consumed daily from 1982 to 2006.
Overall
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, the trend of
consumption
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was different from that of
production
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. It is
also
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notable that
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the
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of
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exceeded
consumption
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in 1982, the opposite was true
at the end
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of the period. In 1982,
production
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stood at just over 2 million
oil
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barrels,
whereas
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consumption
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was less than
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amount
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, at just under 2
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million.
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The figure for
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rose slightly to approximately 3 in 1986 before
leveling
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off by 1994.
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,
consumption
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reached a plateau by 1990,
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followed
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by a significant growth to the same
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as
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in 1992. From 1992, the
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of
consumption
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began to surpass that of
production
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.
Consumption
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increased considerably to just above 6 million
oil
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barrels in 2006,
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the trend for
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remained relatively steady, rising from 3 in 1994 to roughly 3.5 in 2006.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, oil, consumption, production with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • oil production
  • oil consumption
  • gradual increase
  • surpass
  • overtake
  • reliance on imports
  • disparity
  • steady rise
  • growing gap
  • significant
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