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The table shows the percentage of water used by four different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table gives information on the
use
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 of
water
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 by four different countries.
Overall
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, what stands out from the table is that a great amount of
water
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 was used for agriculture in Egypt, Saudi Arabia and New
Zealand
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,
while
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 in
Canada
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,
water
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 was mostly used for industry.
However
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, the lowest
percentage
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 of
water
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 was spent on domestic
use
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. As the table shows, domestic
use
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 accounted for the smallest
percentage
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 of
water
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 consumption. The
percentage
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 of
water
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 used in
Canada
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 was higher than in New
Zealand
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, with 20% and 10% respectively. In Egypt, 8% of
water
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 was used for domestic purposes. Regarding Saudi Arabia, only 6% of
water
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 is used for it. When it comes to Industrial
use
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, the highest
percentage
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 of
water
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 was used in
Canada
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, with 70%. More than of fifth of
water
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 is spent on industry in New
Zealand
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. The proportion of
water
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 used in Egypt was lower than in Saudi Arabia, with 10% and 30%. In terms of agricultural
use
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, Egyptians used a large amount of
water
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, with 82%. In the second place were the Arabs, with 64% of
water
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 used for agricultural purposes.
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 44% of
water
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 is used for agriculture in New
Zealand
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, one in ten of the
water
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 is used in
Canada
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.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words use, water, zealand, canada, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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