The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the number of travellers who used the underground at different
times
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.
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, the given data
surrounds
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ranges
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from 6 to 22 o'clock and
members
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around 450
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members.
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At first glance, we can observe significant changes in numbers until the afternoon. In the early hours number was slightly low. The underground began operating with the lowest passengers, 100
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. At the 7 hour , users doubled,
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, the number peaked at 8
times
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, with 400 travellers.
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, until the afternoon, the underground continued to operate with a few passengers. Between 12 and 14 hours,
members
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' approximate stabilisation was achieved. Before midday,
members
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were
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dramatically decreased
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to clarify, the persons
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used less at 16 o'clock
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apply
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than at other
times
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. The highest figure was observed at 18 o'clock, more than 350 counts. And
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this
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time, the crowd decreased in the underground. In the next
times
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, there are no noticeable changes among them.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words times, members with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "gives" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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