The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given line chart illustrates the expenses on education, healthcare, and pension in a country between 2001 and 2051.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the government spent the most on pensions
and
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medical care became the lowest category
at the end
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of the period. In 2001, the proportion of money spent on education
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initially was
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the highest compared with other sectors, which was approximately 15% of the total income.
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, it decreased slightly after 2021 by 1 percentage point, and the figure remained constant until 2051. The expenditure for retirement was below 10% from 2001 to 2021, yet it reached a peak of about 18% between 2021 and 2051. Health services
cost
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followed a reverse trend with retirement. It was about 11% in 2001 and
leveled
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out in 2011. By 2021, the proportion of medical costs
increased
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had increased
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moderately to 12%, but the expenses dropped dramatically over the following decades.

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