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The table below shows the production of four types of grains from 2010 to 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table demonstrates the
production
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 of four grains (
wheat
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,
barley
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,
maize
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,
rice
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) over the
period
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 from 2010 to 2030.
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,
wheat
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 has the largest
production
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 among grains,
barley
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increasing
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is increasing
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 slightly
and
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, and
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 by the end of
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the period
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period
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 it will have the same amount of
production
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 with a little difference.
Maize
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 and
rice
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 did not
experienced
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a
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great changes. In
2010
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2010,
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wheat
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 was produced in 100
million
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 metric
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tones
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tons
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, by
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. By
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the
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2015
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, producing
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producing
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 of
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wheat&nbsp
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wheat
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apply
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increased to 5
million
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 metric
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tones
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tons
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. In 2020 it did not
rised
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rise
 a lot, to 2
million
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tones
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tons
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. In
2025
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2025,
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wheat
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 was produced in 108
million
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tones
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. By
the
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2030
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2030,
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production
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 is expected
at
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to be at
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 110
million
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tones
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tons
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.
Barley
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in
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production in
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 2010 was 50
million
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tones
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tons
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,
in
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and in
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 2010 the
production
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 is increased to 20
million
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tones
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tons
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. In
subsuquent
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subsequent
 years
barley
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's
production
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growed
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grew
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 to 10
million
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tones
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tons
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.
Maize
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 was produced in 34
million
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tones
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tons
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 in 2010. In 2015 and
2020
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2020,
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 it was produced the same with 34.5
million
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tones
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.
Maize
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production
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 in 2025
increaed
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increased
 to 35
million
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tones
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tons
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 and in 2030 is expected
the
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 same numbers.
Rice
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 has the smallest
production
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 over the
period
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. In
2010
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2010,
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 it was 24.7
million
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tones
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tons
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,
in
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and in
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2015
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2015,
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 it decreased to 24.3
million
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tones
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tons
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.
Then
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 increased to 24.5
million
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tones
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tons
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 in 2020. In
2020
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2020,
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rice
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 was produced in 25
million
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tones
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tons
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and
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, and
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 by the end of
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the period
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period
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period,
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 it
expects
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is expected
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 to be 25.5
million
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tones
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tons
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, wheat, barley, maize, rice, period, million, tones with synonyms.
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