The graph below shows the average retirement age of males and females in six countries in 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table chart illustrates how many
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and men have retired in six places around the world in the year 2003.
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, we can see that Korea had the highest number of retirements among the given countries,
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France had the lowest.
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, it is noticeable that most of the time females had an increased
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number
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of
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compared to the males.
According to
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the data shown, for Australia, males had 64 and females had 63; the difference in
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was four, which was 5
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for the
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and 1
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month for
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men. The age number rose in the USA by one for each sex, but the
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were 6 for males and 2 for
women
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. As for Japan and Italy, both of these areas had similar information, which was 67 for men and 66 for
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, and 4
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and 9
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, respectively. As for France, the number decreased to 57 and 56 each;
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, the
months
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stayed the same.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, months with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • retirement age
  • gender disparity
  • average
  • countries
  • comparisons
  • illustrates
  • features
  • trends
  • outliers
  • noteworthy
  • notable differences
  • economic factors
  • social factors
  • legal factors
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