Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the years. Others believe it would be beneficial to have fewer longer vacation. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that it is better to have many short holidays during the

years

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year

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opponents

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argue that having a few longer

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vacation

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vacations

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would be beneficial. In

this

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essay, I will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of both prospects and

then

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prove that having many short

holiday

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holidays

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outweigh

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outweighs

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the longer

vacations

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. Over the

last

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decade

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people

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think

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have thought

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that having many short

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vacation

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vacations

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would be better in many countries

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, specially

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specially

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europe

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Europe

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this

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situation

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situation,

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people

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can handle the relationship with their relatives

and

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people

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have more time for family and friends.

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, the cost of travel

are

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decreased in

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approach.

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need to explore a new place

and

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it does not

necessary

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necessarily

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have to

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be in a place.

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people

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in Germany try to get several short

vacations

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for their family reunion and

traveling

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travelling

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, citizens argue that having a few longer

vacations

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not only helps

people

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apply

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stay far from the hustle and bustle of the cities but

also

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can boost their energy during the

vacation

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. Being with family on

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apply

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long

vacations

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could help children

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apply

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develop

the

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relationship with their family.

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, long

vacations

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can reduce

the

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apply

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people

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potentiel

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potential

. In

this

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situation, experts are not able to remember everything from their tasks after the

vacations

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To conclude

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, being

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a long

vacation

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such

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as trips or family

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gatherings

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gathering

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gathering,

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may

causes

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cause

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several

dificulties

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difficulties

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, having several short

holiday

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holidays

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not only

encourage

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encourages

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people

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to explore

the

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apply

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new places but

also

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apply

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helps individuals

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apply

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reduce

the wasting

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wasted

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time

and

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, and

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many experts can remember their

prevoius

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task

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tasks

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after the holiday.

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Dec 28, 2025

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task

Make your view clear in the intro and restate it in the conclusion. Stick to one main idea per paragraph and explain why.

coherence

Use clear topic sentences to begin each paragraph and use links to show ideas fit together.

grammar

Check grammar and spelling. Use simple, correct sentences. Break long sentences into short ones.

examples

Give real examples with simple facts or places to back up points.

content balance

The essay shows an effort to discuss both sides.

structure

The intro shows the plan of the essay.

content

Examples are used to explain points.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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