The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010

The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of males and females who act as teachers in 6 different academic places in the UK in 2010.
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,
although
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the number of women who teach at nursery, primary, and secondary
school
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was higher compared to other genders, the figures for university and private institutions were popular for men.
To begin
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with, the percentage of women at nursery, primary, and secondary school was well under 100%, well over 80% and below 60% respectively,
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these numbers for men at nursery and primary institutions were
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minor significance. Turning to other sites, teaching at university and private institutions for men was under 60% and well over 60% respectively,
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this
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rate was just over 40% and above 20% for females. Surprisingly, teaching at college was equal for both sexes around 45%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • educational settings
  • percentage
  • representation
  • disparities
  • predominance
  • gender imbalance
  • societal expectations
  • historical roles
  • implications
  • trends
  • gender gap
  • educational outcomes
  • gender stereotypes
  • policies
  • initiatives
  • perceptions
  • effectiveness
  • primary school
  • secondary school
  • nursery
  • university
  • further education
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