The bar chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age groups in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006.

The bar chart illustrates the number of adults using
internet
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the internet
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divided into five
age
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groups in percentage from 2003 to 2006.
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, the
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of 16-24 is the highest among all in 2005
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meanwhile, over 65
group
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always stays at the lowest position.
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there is a constant growth between
two
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the two
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groups
25
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, 25
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to 44 and 45 to 54. At the
age
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of 16 to 24, there was no change in two years
2003
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, 2003
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and
2004
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2004,
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with 80%. In 2003,
its
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it
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suddenly reached its peak 100% to
became
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become
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the highest
data
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point
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of
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on
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the graph.
However
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,
this
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age
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group
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of user
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user
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users
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had been reduced to 90% in 2006.
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contrary
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the contrary
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, the
member
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members
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of 65 and above got the lowest
user
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usage
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. Their total usage never
went surpass
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exceeded
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20%, and in 2003, there was no record for their data. In four years, the
age
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of
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groups of
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25 to 44 and 45 to 54 grew constantly
which
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, which
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is 10% and 5%, respectively. The
group
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from 55 to 64 fluctuated slightly around 30% from 2003 to 2005,
then
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shot up to 50% in 2006.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words age, group with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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