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Writing Samples
Band 4

Plastic containers have become more prevalent than ever. They are used in many businesses such as in the food and beverage sector. Do you think the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Plastic
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 bags have become very hard to replace
due to
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its
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their
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 durability and
long lasting
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long-lasting
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 lifespan. They are being used in almost every business for packaging, handling and many other purposes. I believe that there are more negative impacts of using plastics than the positive
.
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impacts.
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Plastic
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have
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has
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 been introduced
couple
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a couple
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 of decades ago in
a
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the
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 practice of making a cheap replacement
of
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for
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 carry bags to handle
the
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apply
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small items like
grocery
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groceries
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 to big
products
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 like
refrigerator
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refrigerators
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.
This
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 industry
increase
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has increased
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 drastically
due to
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 its convenience and
cheap
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low
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 price in comparison with
tradional
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traditional
 shopping bags.
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, it requires less labour to produce and provides more
logetivity
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longevity
 than other materials. Not only for packaging
but
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, but
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plastic
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 is known for making many
products
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 for daily usage like containers, racks and furniture. Despite
of
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apply
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being usable in almost every aspect of human life,
plastic
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products
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is
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are
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 the biggest problem for the world these days
,
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.
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 These items do not decompose and remain on the ground for thousands of years which
creates
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creating
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 a global issue of litter and waste management. It impacts the quality of soil, water and air by
pullting
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polluting
 it with toxic chemicals.
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, recent studies
shows
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show
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 that an average person consumes
considerable
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a considerable
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 amount
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plastic
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of plastic
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 residue daily from
the
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apply
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packaged food
which
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, which
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 leads to health
problem
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problems
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 all around the world. In my
opnion
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opinion
,
plastic
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 goods were the
short term
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short-term
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 solution for the bigger problem with no real research on
its
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their
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neagtive
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negative
 impacts when it discovered. People started
realizing
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realising
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 that its disadvantages are more severe than its advantages. They all should reuse the
plastic
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products
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 as
muct
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much
 as possible until they find a legit solution to
takle
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tackle
 the waste.

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language
Fix your spell and word form to make a clear read.
coherence
Put one main idea in each paragraph and link ideas with simple glue words like and, but, so.
content
Give clear and direct examples that show how plastic harms land, water, and health.
task response
Finish with a short end that restates your view again.
language
Use only common words and short sentences to keep ideas clear.
language
Check for spelling mistakes and long words that are hard to read.
content
You show a clear view that plastics have more bad than good.
content
You raise ideas on harm to soil, water, air, and health.
structure
You try to use more than one idea and show some effort to link ideas.
Fully explain your ideas

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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