The chart illustrates the comparison of various types of energy generation in France namely coal, gas, petro, nuclear and the other energy over the period of 10 years starting in 1995.

The chart demonstrates the comparison of various types of

energy

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generation

France

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in France

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namely

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, namely

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coal,

gas

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petro

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,nuclear and

the

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apply

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other

energy

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over the period of 10 years starting in 1995.

Overall

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, it is clear what is

show

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shown

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,there are five

comparison

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comparisons

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energy

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production

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such

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, such

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gas

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,coal,

petro

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,nuclear and other.

In addition

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gas

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Wrong verb form

was

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so popular in 1995 and 2005.

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however

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However

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,other

comparison

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comparisons

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energy

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production are unpopular.

According to

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what is shown

is that

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in 1995 the

puplic

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public

use

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used

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gas

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for 29.36.

Moreover

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,coal

are

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used

29.80

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by 29.80

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% of them.

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petro

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Petroleum

are

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used by 29.27% of them.

they

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They

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used nuclear by 6.40 %.

However

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,in

2005

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2005,

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people used cars for 30.31%. They used coal for 30

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years.

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93%.

Therefore

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, 19.55 % of people used

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petro

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petrol

Also

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,nuclear

are

Wrong verb form

energy is

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used by 10.10 %of people.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.

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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, gas, petro with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "comparison" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "comparison" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21
Grammar mistakes
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<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

118 words

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