People are having more and more sugar- based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?
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are having more and more
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because they keep it like
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as breakfast,lunch and
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is a bad
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because it
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your
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pot your fat body more
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the sugar drink
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not drinking at lunch or becefecly at diner
your time to sleep
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apple juice or
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Make a clear plan before you write. Write a short intro, two reasons, two fixes, and a short end.
Link ideas with small words. Use 'first', 'next', 'also', 'but', and 'for example' to join points.
Use one idea per paragraph. Start each paragraph with a small sentence about the idea.
You chose a real topic about sugar drinks.
You say that sugar drinks can harm and that people should drink less.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Summary
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
Example:
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- Finally
- In a nutshell
- In general