The pie chart below shows the comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years.

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The pie chart presents data on different
energy
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manifacture
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manufacturing
in France, illustrating how proportions are distributed among coal, gas,
petro
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petroleum
, nuclear, and other
energy
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production in 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, coal constituted the biggest share in both years,
while
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the category of other
energy
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represented only a minor proportion. A clear gap
seperated
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separated
the major contributors from the smaller ones. In detail, coal was the largest category at around 29,80%, which was slightly more than gas at around 29,63% in 1995. Almost the same proportions were observed at around 30,93% and 30,31% in 2005, respectively. Petro
which
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, which
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formed less than a third of the chart in both
years
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years,
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decreased considerably, falling from 29,27% to 19,55% over these years.
Conversely
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, the
categoriy
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category
of nuclear contributed 6,40% in 1995 and 10,10% in 2005
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an
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approximately
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. The other
energy
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production is the least significant category, contributing only 4,90% and 9,10% in 1995 and 2005, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • energy
  • share
  • part
  • type
  • year
  • increase
  • decrease
  • rise
  • fall
  • grow
  • drop
  • up
  • down
  • more
  • less
  • than
  • compared with
  • in contrast
  • whereas
  • overall
  • generally
  • largest
  • smallest
  • big
  • small
  • percent
  • in year 1
  • in year 2
  • unchanged
  • stable
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