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Artificial Intelligence (AI) is becoming increasingly prevalent in our daily lives, from self-driving cars to automated customer service. While some people see AI as a great advancement, others worry about its impact on society. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of AI

In recent years, the daily use of Artificial Intelligence has
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, from cars driven by robots to self-reply systems. Some argue that AI brings great development, others see its
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 on society. In
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 discuss the benefits and the drawbacks of AI. On the one hand, some
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 value AI as
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advanced
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works
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 can use AI to
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 large data and sort into different figures. It
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 people put effort
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 the major decisions
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, AI has amount of negative
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 in
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 generation. To
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illustrate
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 the development of AI, more and more people rely on it.
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, students use AI to
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their
 original writing, and upload it without any change as their assignment. The heavy
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reliance
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 AI leads to the lack of critical thinking skills of
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. In conclusion, Artificial Intelligence not only bring the
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 has the potential drawbacks under the surface.

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structure
Plan before you write. Have a short intro, two body parts, and a simple ending.
content
Give one clear view. Add a quick idea or fact for each point.
grammar
Use simple, correct grammar. Check subject and verb for each sentence.
coherence
Use easy linking words to join ideas, like first, also, but, so.
structure
Your essay has an introduction and a conclusion.
content
You discuss both sides of AI.
coherence
You try to use contrasts with 'On the one hand' and 'On the other hand'.
Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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