The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

A town named Little Chalfont illustrates a graph
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detailing
about public library.
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, in the pie chart, the largest number who use the library are
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gentlemen
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.
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the others remain the same. In the table, the top percentages are
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children
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children's
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and adult fiction.
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the other categories are approximately equal figures. In the bar graph, all of them are nearly numbers. Except
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first year, it is the lowest. In 2016, the pie diagram, young people
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and over was the lowest one with 12 per
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. The young adults from 13 to 17 were 15 per
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. The
children
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rose a little bit with 22 per
cent
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.
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, the adults who from 65 and above were the maximum with 51 per
cent
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. The category total of loans,
children
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's fiction and adult fiction has the same percentage with 38,
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they are the maximum category.
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, the manimam
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was
children
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's DVDs with 1 precent. In the bar chart, the number of loans has fluctuated all the year. In 2007 recorded the lowest figure was recorded with 15,000. In 2011, it had rocketed to about 22,000.
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in 2016, the number increased by about 24,000.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words children, cent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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