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8. You have recently faced a problem at the airport. An employee of the airport helped you with this matter. Write a letter to the airport manager and say - What was the problem - How did that person help you - Suggest the manager to praise this emplovee in some wav.

Dear Sir, I am Vipanjit. I am writing
this
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 letter to express my feelings regarding your employee who helped me
to
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face my problems at
airport
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the airport
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. I travelled from Vancouver to Hong
kong
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Kong
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 on 12 January 2026. My
flight
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 number was AC124. Actually, when I was collecting my
luggage
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, one of my
luggage
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was
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items was
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 missing. I was very
tensed
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 because I
have
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had
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 my important documents in there.
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 to
this
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, I missed
my
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another connecting
flight
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. Ram batched number 1234 helped me to find my
luggage
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and
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 he booked my
anothet
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another
flight
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 which was
very
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a very
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 relaxed feeling for me.
Firstly
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, when I contacted Ram and told
that
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him that
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 my
luggage
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 was missing. He asked me
descriptions
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 of my baggage. He checked everywhere and
finally
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 got my baggage.
Also
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, he
contact
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 the airport manager about my missed
flight
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and
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 he booked another
flight
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 for me. I would like to
thanks
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thank
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to
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all of your
employee
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. Ram was very friendly. I would say, if you can call his name in
huddle
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a huddle
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 as a good
employee
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employee,
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 that would be great. Yours
Sincerely
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sincerely
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, Abc

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coherence construction
Your letter has many ideas in one block. Try to use one idea per paragraph and add clear links like first, next, then, finally.
grammar and vocabulary
Check grammar and use common words. Short sentences make text easy to read.
content suggestion
Mention the staff name and the date, and show clearly how the issue was fixed.
structure
Polite opening and closing
content coverage
Includes the main points and how the problem was fixed
tone
Tone stays respectful
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