The pie charts below show the percentage of housing owned and rented in the UK in 1991 and 2007. Summarize the information by describing the main features of the charts and making comparisons where appropriate.

The two pie charts compare the proportions of different types of housing tenure in the UK in 1991 and 2007. They
also
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indicate that the total number of
homes
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increased from 22
million
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to 27
million
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over
this
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period.
Overall
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, home ownership became significantly more common by 2007,
while
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all forms of social housing declined. Private renting,
however
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, remained unchanged in percentage terms. In 1991, 60% of
homes
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were owner‑occupied, representing around 13
million
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properties.
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figure rose markedly to 70% in 2007, equivalent to approximately 19
million
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homes
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.
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, the share of social renting fell from 23% to 17%,
although
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the actual number of socially rented
homes
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stayed roughly the same at about 5
million
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due to
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the growth in total housing stock. Social housing experienced the most dramatic decline, dropping from 6% to just 2% of all
homes
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. Meanwhile, private renting accounted for 11% in both years, but the number of privately rented properties increased to nearly 3
million
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in 2007
as a result
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of the
overall
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expansion in housing.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Replace the words homes, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • owned
  • rented
  • housing
  • show
  • decreased
  • increased
  • shift
  • trend
  • years
  • common
  • prices
  • economic
  • changes
  • people
  • homes
  • compared
  • specific
  • features
  • main
  • information
  • around
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