The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
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chart illustrates information about the number of
car
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journeys
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into the city centre made by residents and non-residents between 1996 and 2005.
Overall
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,
car
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journeys
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for residents have decreased significantly,
whereas
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car
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journeys
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for non-residents saw no change over the 9-year period. At the start, Resident
car
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joruneys
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journeys
were higher, but
at the end
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of the period, non-resident
car
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journeys
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overtook them. Resident
car
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journeys
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started at just below 10,000 per day and stayed relatively constant over the next 3 years. But in the year 2000, when parking meters were introduced into the city centre, their
car
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journeys
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fell
off
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to approximately 5000 in the
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year
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2001, 2002 and 2003.
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, the closure of Westgate Street and Park Lane
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traffic led them to reach an all-time low of around 4,000 in 2003, 2004 and 2005.
On the other hand
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, Non-resident
car
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journeys
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started at 5,000
journeys
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per day in 1996 before gradually increasing to approximately 8,000 and remained close to that number in the next 3 years before suffering a massive drop in 2003, reaching their lowest point of 3,000. But
car
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journeys
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for non-residents resurged slightly to just under 5,000 in 2005.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words car, journeys with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • car journeys
  • city centre
  • residents
  • non-residents
  • total number
  • significant differences
  • travel behaviour
  • trends
  • increase
  • decrease
  • peak times
  • possible reasons
  • work commitments
  • leisure activities
  • public transport
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