The charts below show the percentage of food and goods bought in supermarkets in 3 European countries in 1998 and 2008.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart compares the amount of goods and food from three different countries, A,
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and
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, in supermarkets in 1998 and 2008.
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, it's clear from the data that countries A and
B
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had a dramatic increase , particularly for food,
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country C
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C
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experienced a decline in stores. A similar pattern can be observed for other goods. Country A saw a sharp increase from 10% to 35% in 2008, representing the largest growth among the three regions.
B
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had a slight rise from just over 20% to just under 30% in 2008. Country
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, which had the smallest changes it was just over 5 and remained steady.
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other goods in A , the proportion of them surged dramatically from 5% to just under 40% in 2008.
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compared to others, stayed stable and had just a few changes , like 25% to 26%,
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had significant growth to 15% from 2%.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words b, c with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
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