The charts below give information about a public library in a town called Little Chalfont. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graphs illustrate the information of a library in Little Chalfont between 2007 and 2016.
Overall
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, most of the users of the library are
adults
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, and the most popular
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of books are children's
fiction
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and adult
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.
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, the total number of loans increases gradually in
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period.
To begin
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with,
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the pie chart, over half of the members of Little Chalfont Library were
adults
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(51%)
aging
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between 18 and 64, followed by children (22%) and young
adults
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(15%). The least active group of people were
adults
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who
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65 or over. Moving to the table, it showed the total loan of books by category. Most readers borrowed
fiction
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books, with 38% of children's
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and adult
fiction
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, respectively. Looking at the bar chart, in 2007, the total number of loans was
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about 15,000, steadily
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in the
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years, and reached a peak
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over 20,000 in 2011.
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, it started to decrease to less than 20,000 in 2013, but bounced back to about 23,000 in the
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three years.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, fiction with synonyms.
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