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Band 4.5

You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists

Dear Sir, I am writing to appreciate you and the entire staff of City
global hotels
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 for your Hospitality during my stay a few weeks back. My short stay in your hotel was a memorable and
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enjoyable one owing to the location of the hotel
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 is located right at the heart of the town
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 opportunities for customers to be secured during their stay, access good quality roads, and timely healthcare from the prestigious Federal University teaching hospital. One thing
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 cherished most was the neatness of the environs
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 the pool area and the
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roof top
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rooftop
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 aerial view of the famous city park. In appreciation for your hospitality and my special way of returning your gesture, I have written a fantastic review of your hotel on a famous website to encourage and refer tourists wishing to visit the city to check out your wonderful space. Thank you so much for having me.

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grammar
Check your capitals. Always write I as a big letter.
structure
Break the text into 2 or 3 small parts. Start with a hello, then the main notes, then a close.
coherence
Put one idea in each part. Do not mix ideas in one line.
lexicon
Use simple words for what you mean. For example, say the pool and the view from the roof.
tone
Polite and kind tone.
content
You tell why you liked the stay and say you wrote a review.
The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expressing gratitude
  • exceptional service
  • hospitality
  • cleanliness
  • quality of food
  • attentiveness
  • memorable experiences
  • organized tours
  • unique facilities
  • positive review
  • tourist website
  • motivated
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