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illustrate
proportion
of transport categories in a European city from 1960 to 2000.
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the proportion
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car
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bus
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bike
and foot over the period. Fix the agreement mistake
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foot and bike travellers plummeted dramatically. Meanwhile, travel by bus fluctuated throughout the given period.
Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the use of Linking Words
car
surged significantly by 20% to 25% in Fix the agreement mistake
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1980
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1980,
then
reached a peak of 35%. Linking Words
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travellers by foot dropped by 20 percent Punctuation problem
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point
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at
15% in 1980. Change preposition
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it hit the bottom of 10%. Bike travellers accounted Linking Words
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however
, it took up 25%, which was the second biggest proportion in 1960. Linking Words
Furthermore
, travel by bus fluctuated over the given period. It started at 18% in 1960Linking Words
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and reached its peak at 25%. Remove the comma
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it dropped 16% in 2000.Linking Words