The line graph shows the information average number of visitors entering a museum in summer and winter in 2003. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The line graph illustrates the

number

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of

people

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visiting a

museum

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in

summer

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and

winter

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in 2023.

Furthermore

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, it gives us information about the volume of

people

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entering the

museum

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at different

hours

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of the day.

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,

summer

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had a higher

number

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of

visitors

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at the

museum

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compared to the

winter

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season. During

summer

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, the

number

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of

visitors

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at the

museum

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increased steadily throughout the morning

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and decreased in the afternoon, but a small spike in

visitors

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was recorded at around 4pm .

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, during

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winter

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winter,

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the

number

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of

visitors

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in the morning

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fluctuated and steadily declined after 12pm. During

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summer

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the summer

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, the

number

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of attendees at the

museum

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rose steadily in the morning and recorded 1200

visitors

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by 11 am. By 12

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pm

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the

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rose marginally

and

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, and

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more than 1400

people

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were recorded entering the

museum

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. After 12pm, the

number

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of

visitors

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fell sharply

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, with

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only 1000

people

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visiting between 2pm to 3pm.

However

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, a small spike in

visitors

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was recorded at around 4

pm

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. Regardless, the

amount

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number

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of

visitors

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at the

museum

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declined sharply during the next

hours

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and

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, and

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the

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returned to zero between 5

pm

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and 6

pm

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. In

winter

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, the

number

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of

visitors

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fluctuated throughout the morning

hours

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and showed a steady decline at around 11:30

pm

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.

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number

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of

visitors

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increased between 8 am and 10 am. Between 10 am and 12

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pm

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pm,

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the

numbers

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of

vistors

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visitors

fluctuate steadily. A maximum

number

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of 600

visitors

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were

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was

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recorded close to 12

pm

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during

this

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season.