The chart beiow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the
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of
households
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in England and Wales that either owned or rented accommodation between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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, there was a clear reversal in trends
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. Renting
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was the dominant form of housing in the early years, but
home
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ownership
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became increasingly common and eventually overtook renting as the most popular choice. In detail, in 1918, rented accommodation was overwhelmingly prevalent, with nearly 80% of
households
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living in rented properties,
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only about 20% owned their homes.
This
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pattern continued until the 1970s, with the
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of rented
households
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steadily declining and
home
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ownership
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rising. By 1971, the two figures converged at exactly 50%. After 1971,
home
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ownership
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continued to increase, reaching a peak of nearly 70% around 2001.
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, the
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of rented
households
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fell to a low of just under 30% during the same period. In the final decade,
however
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, there was a slight shift
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home
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ownership
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decreased marginally,
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the
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of rented
households
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experienced a small rebound.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, households, home, ownership with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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