The chart beiow shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
households
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living in owner-occupied and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.
Overall
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, renting was the dominant form of housing at the beginning of the period,
whereas
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home
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ownership
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increased steadily over time and eventually became the more common choice. Notably, the two figures were equal in 1971, after which the
proportion
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of
home
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ownership
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continued to rise before experiencing a slight decline
at the end
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of the period. In 1918, rented accommodation accounted for the vast majority of housing, with approximately 77% of
households
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renting their homes,
while
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only 23% owned their properties. Over the following decades, the
proportion
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of rented housing declined gradually as
home
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ownership
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became increasingly popular. By 1971, the two figures had converged at 50%, indicating that the number of
households
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owning homes had caught up with those renting. After 1971,
home
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ownership
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continued to rise and reached a peak of around 69% in 2001.
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, the
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of rented accommodation fell to its lowest level of approximately 31% in the same year.
However
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,
this
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trend reversed slightly during the final decade. By 2011, the share of
home
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ownership
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had declined modestly to 64%,
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the
proportion
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of rented
households
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increased slightly to 36%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words households, home, ownership, proportion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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