Write to formal letter to the library Manager.

"Dear Manager, Thank you for your email regarding the library's closure next month.

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I understand the reasons for

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decision, I was a bit disappointed because I was planning to go there to prepare for my exams. In my opinion, it would be highly beneficial to provide a wider range of books on school subjects.

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would enable many members to concentrate more effectively during their study sessions.

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, most students rely on these books to prepare for their final exams."

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, I would suggest improving the heating system to ensure comfort during the cold weather. I

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recommend

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one-day extracurricular activities,

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as academic competitions, specifically for students. These initiatives would not only boost personal development but

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help maintain their mental well-being.Thank you for considering my suggestions. I sincerely appreciate your time and hope that my opinion will be helpful. Yours faithfully Maftuna Narziyeva,

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Feb 22, 2026

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organization

Fix the small errors in the form. Try to keep one idea in each paragraph and link ideas with simple words.

task handling

Make the start and end clear. State what you ask for and end with a gentle hope or request.

grammar

Check for stray marks and long phrases. Use short, plain sentences and common words in a formal tone.

tone

The writer is polite and kind in tone.

formality

The letter uses the right form for a formal note.

content

Gives real ideas that may help the library.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

147 words

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Write to formal letter to the library Manager.

plastic is bad for envirvomet tell me you causes and soultion

In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Every year several language die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree?