You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest
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organiser throughout the time of my training
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is to be conducted in the UK. First off, I was very glad to hear that the institution is considering their students and members as a potential candidate for
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I would like to be shortlisted
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that I have a genuine interest when it comes to hosting any
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be it formal, informal or anything in between. As for the
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itself, I require extra information
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as the application process, any basic or additional fees and candidate requirements.
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want to know the type of social programmes that you want the to-be organiser to plan for and whether the events are to be organised for a fixed duration of the training or for the whole month. Aside from being
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enthusiastic
, energetic and socially outward, I understand that being an organiser is a huge responsibility and involves time management, detailed attention, multi-tasking and efficient communication with the team. I want you to know that I possess all these traits
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on top of that
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is my speciality.
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, my past experiences are in arranging events and parties, meet and greets, formal
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, I would like to be
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considered
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. Hoping to hear a positive response from you. Kind Regards, Alex Shaff

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task response
Task Response: Split the note into clear parts. State why you want the job, ask for info, and show what work you have done. Use small, clear ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Coherence and Cohesion: Use three small parts (intro, body, end). Use short lines and connect ideas with easy words like and, but, also. Put one idea in one paragraph.
structure
Polite start and finish are there.
content
It shows your wish to be the events organiser and lists past work.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • interested
  • event
  • organiser
  • role
  • request
  • information
  • experience
  • organisation
  • responsibility
  • participants
  • training
  • programme
  • welcome
  • details
  • skills
  • communication
  • helpful
  • plan
  • team
  • creative
  • manage
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