The chart shows air pollution levels among four countries in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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, China had the highest levels of air pollution in 2012.
This
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was followed by America, Japan and Australia in a distant
last
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place. Of the three main polluting sectors, industry was the main contributor in China and Japan
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while
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, while
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transportation was by far the most significant factor in America. In
Australia
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Australia,
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all factors had an equal share.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • air pollution levels
  • sources of pollution
  • industrial pollution
  • transportation-related pollution
  • household pollution
  • highest levels
  • lowest levels
  • notable changes
  • anomalies
  • comparisons
  • summarise
  • highlight
  • analyze
  • chart
  • data
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