You have an appointment with your manager the next day. Write him/her a letter about what you’re going to discuss at the meeting. In your meeting, you should tell: What did you do for the company during the years you worked there, What changes you would like to recommend, What training you require

Dear Sir I am writing regarding the
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of our meeting tomorrow . I would like to go through the recent profits that our organisation made and my role in that success. In the past few
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had always come out on top as the most efficient and the hardest worker in our company , but I would like to climb the corporate ladder to be more vital to the company .
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my viewpoint , there are a few key factors we have been missing all these years that can help us undermine our competition and lead the market for an absolute monopoly in our region . I would like to put my name forward for the vacant
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I would still require some training in handling large
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I am absolutely willing to learn in the upcoming time. I would reform the
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management so it is easy for us to make our employees more productive . I am looking forward
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our meeting . Yours Faithfully Abhijeet Sandhu

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structure
Put one idea in each paragraph. Start with the main point, then add details in new paragraphs.
language
Fix spelling and grammar. Use simple words. For example 'assistant general manager' not 'assitant', and 'data' not 'datas'.
tone and content
Keep tone professional. Do not use phrases about beating rivals or monopoly. Focus on your work, skills, and how you help the company.
purpose
You state a wish to grow and be more useful to the company.
attitude
You show willingness to take training.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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