The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comprasions where relevant.

The diagram compares the weekly household spending over the eight different categories throughout
a
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50-year of 1968-2018. In general,
expense
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expenses
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on food, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, personal goods, and fuel and power decreased significantly
,
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otherwise
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the
three
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other three
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others
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apply
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surged profoundly during 1968 and 2018, except for
houshold
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household
goods. Taking a closer look at the chart, families
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spent most
their
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of their
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income on food in 1968,
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it went down
halve
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half
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after 50 years.
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, clothing and
footware
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footwear
, personal goods, and fuel and power figures plummeted roughly 50% of their initial figures, but their spending on these
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less compared to food.
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, the three other features grew drastically, as it can be seen on the leisure, transport, and housing percentages jumped to double
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their original expense in 50 years, which are housing and leisure shares
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being
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the highest rise.
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, home appliances are reported
stay
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to stay
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stagnant
throught
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throughout
the period in question.

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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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