The diagram compares the weekly household spending over the eight different categories throughout
a
50-year of 1968-2018. In general, Correct article usage
the
expense
on food, clothing and Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
footware
, personal goods, and fuel and power decreased significantlyCorrect your spelling
footwear
,
Punctuation problem
;
Linking Words
otherwise
the Add a comma
otherwise,
three
Correct word choice
other three
others
surged profoundly during 1968 and 2018, except for Fix the agreement mistake
apply
houshold
goods.
Taking a closer look at the chart, families Correct your spelling
household
are
spent most Verb problem
apply
their
income on food in 1968, Change preposition
of their
although
it went down Linking Words
halve
after 50 years. Use the right word
half
Likewise
, clothing and Linking Words
footware
, personal goods, and fuel and power figures plummeted roughly 50% of their initial figures, but their spending on these Correct your spelling
footwear
were
less compared to food.
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
By contrast
, the three other features grew drastically, as it can be seen on the leisure, transport, and housing percentages jumped to double Linking Words
of
their original expense in 50 years, which are housing and leisure shares Change preposition
apply
were
the highest rise. Wrong verb form
being
Moreover
, home appliances are reported Linking Words
stay
stagnant Verb problem
to stay
throught
the period in question.Correct your spelling
throughout