The line graph below shows the consumption of 3 different types of fast food in Britain from 1970 to 1990. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The line graph
illustrated
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the amount of fast food consumed, which
are
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includes
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hamburgers, fish & chips, and
pizza
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in
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, in
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Britain during 1970 and 1990. Units are measured in
grams
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Overall
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, it is apparent that fish & chips started to trend upward in 1980
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similarly
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, Hamburgers
also
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had an increase in consumption during 1985.
In contrast
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,
pizza
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remained as the popular fast food at the start of the period, but
overtime
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over time
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it started
lose
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to lose
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popularity in 1975 and continued to dip downwards. With regards to the amount of fish & chips consumed, it began with just under 100
grams
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and
then
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peaked at a staggering 500
grams
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by 1990.
Likewise
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, Hamburgers intake began at under 50
grams
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and slowly rose to just over 100
grams
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in 1985
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this
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trend spiked exponentially between 1985 and 1990 to just under 300
grams
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.
On the other hand
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,
Pizza
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consumption was 300
grams
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in 1970 and gradually decreased between 1975 and 1985.
This
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trend remained stagnant as by 1990,
pizza
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consumption
capped
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had capped
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in
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apply
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1990 at just a little over 200
grams
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pizza, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • rise
  • grow
  • increase
  • go up
  • climb
  • steady
  • sharp
  • rise steadily
  • fall
  • decrease
  • drop
  • remain
  • stay
  • level off
  • peak
  • high
  • low
  • be higher than
  • be lower than
  • in the end
  • at the start
  • over the period
  • by 1990
  • from 1970 to 1990
  • more than
  • less than
  • compare
  • contrast
  • the most
  • the least
  • overall
  • during the period
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