Consuming excessive amounts of
sugar
is detrimental to human Use synonyms
health
. Opinions are divided Use synonyms
whether
the authorities should be responsible for restricting how much Change preposition
on whether
sugar
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people
can consume or whether each individual should regulate their own intake of sugary Use synonyms
products
. Use synonyms
While
I acknowledge the former, I still firmly agree with the latter as, to me, individuals should take primary responsibility for controlling their Linking Words
sugar
consumption in order to reduce the risk of various diseases.
Those who argue that the government has the duty to control and restrict Use synonyms
people
from Use synonyms
this
bad issue may point to the power they possess over the public. They may well argue that politicians should enforce strict laws on excessive carbohydrate consumption and implement strategies to protect citizens’ Linking Words
health
. Use synonyms
For example
, they can impose heavy tax on soft drinks like Linking Words
coca cola
, which is often Fix capitalization
Coca-Cola
treated
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blamed
to
be the cause of obesity and diabetes, leading to an increase in retail prices and thereby causing a financial bottleneck to customers. Change preposition
for
As a result
, consumers have to opt for alternative drinks, which are much healthier and contain less Linking Words
sugar
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
this
effect is only temporary Linking Words
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while
in the long Punctuation problem
, while
run
the government can not control all Add a comma
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since Change the spelling
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people
will strive to overuse these Use synonyms
products
regardlessUse synonyms
,
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. For
for example
, Linking Words
historically
there are tons of rules and regulations for restricting the use of drugsPunctuation problem
historically,
,
and alcohol Punctuation problem
apply
but
there are still several Punctuation problem
, but
people
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still
using them.
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apply
Nevertheless
, I am still in favour that individuals have the right to choose what they eat without having external forces imposing their preferences, and have Linking Words
responsibility
to care for their Correct article usage
the responsibility
health
. In fact, cutting down on the excessive intake of Use synonyms
sugar
not only helps maintain Use synonyms
healthy
weight but Correct article usage
a healthy
also
lowers the risks of serious illnesses ranging from obesity to heart attack. Linking Words
In addition
, lasting dietary change usually occurs only when Linking Words
people
are self-disciplined and aware of the consequences of overconsuming sugary Use synonyms
products
. Use synonyms
Although
supermarkets are filled with foods Linking Words
having
a negative impact on Wrong verb form
that have
health
, each person has the duty to regulate their own eating habits and aim for a balanced diet. Use synonyms
For instance
, if parents can check nutrition labels and limit high-Linking Words
sugar
items at home, they will protect both themself and their children from suffering from numerous disorders, building lifelong healthy eating habits. Even if the government restricts Use synonyms
sugar
in some Use synonyms
products
, Use synonyms
people
can still overconsume through desserts, drinks and home cooking.
In conclusion, it is understandable why Use synonyms
centralized
policies restricting excessive usage of Change the spelling
centralised
sugar
by authorities are mandatory. Use synonyms
However
, I would take the view that controlling daily intake depends on individual choices.Linking Words