The graph shows the number of visitors (in millions) to the British Museum, the Science Museum, and the Natural History Museum between 2000 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The average attendance at three different museums in the summer months between 2000 and 2015 is depicted in the line graph. The British
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recorded the highest number of visitors throughout the summer months
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rising sharply from June to July.
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, visits to the Science and Natural History museums declined gradually over the same period. In the month of July, the British
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attendance peaked at 750 visitors, after which it suffered a decrease as figures dropped to only 500 in August. The Science
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continued to plummet between July and August
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for the Natural History
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plateaued. Between August and September, all three museums saw a rise in attendance
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and the Science
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seeing
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significant increase in
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as compared to the Natural History
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