The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart gives information about the proportion of
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consumption, and the bar chart shows the
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of residential
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usage in Australia in 2004.
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, the highest
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of
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consumption was used for residential purposes.
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, the garden and bathroom were the highest residential
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use in 2004. As can be seen in the pie chart, 70%
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was used for residential purposes in 2004. Followed by industrial and business, which accounted for 11%. and 10% respectively. The
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of
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used by the Government was only 6% and the other with the lowest
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at 3%. Regarding residential
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use, in 2004, most of the
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was used for showers and gardens, which were almost the same , with 27% and 28% respectively. Followed by laundry with 20%,
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figure was much higher than that of the kitchen with 10%.
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, ranking third among the residential
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was toilet usage with 15% in 2004.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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