Some people think that in order to solve traffic and transportation problems people should be encouraged to live in cities rather than in suburbs or in the countryside. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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considerable doubt over whether urban migration can address

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and transportation predicaments. I strongly assert that it will not only put a burden on the transportation

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but

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worsen

traffic

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congestion

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with, metropolitan growth can significantly intensify the demand for the transit network. Nowadays, public transport is not fully reliable

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in

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. If more people start to live in

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, it is more likely that some of them will use it for commuting and other purposes, which can lead to

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of the existing transit network.

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in Brampton is growing rapidly, exerting pressure on the

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. Since public buses frequently reach maximum capacity during peak hours, residents have to wait for

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subsequent vehicles, which is creating frustration among them.

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, a rise in urban population can compound the existing

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traffic

jams. The majority of people still work at a substantial distance from their residences, leading to heavy reliance on private transport.

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, not only are more cars seen on roads, but some people

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park them on streets, which can result in delaying the clearance of

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.

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, a primary example of

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is seen in megacities like Delhi, Mumbai in India. A few decades ago, the government encouraged citizens to move into the

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by setting up new universities and other amenities.

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,

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congestion

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has become a grimmer problem in these

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, I contend that rural-to-urban migration cannot alleviate

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congestion

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and demand for

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system

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trend can lead to

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the burden on the present

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conditions are expected to deleterious

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further

, and the requirements for transit facilities

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