The graph below shows the unemployment rates in the UK, the rest of Europe and Japan from 1993 to 2007.

The line graph illustrates the number of

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required to manufacture a

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at US plants for four specific car companies (General Motors, Ford, Toyota and Honda) over a seven-year

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1998.

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, all four companies improved their

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efficiency by the end of the

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there was a large difference in

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times in 1998, the figures for all four manufacturers converged at a similar level by 2005. The number of

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required by General Motors had decreased considerably by the end of the

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, falling to an all-time low of 22

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. Ford started at a slightly lower point of 28

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, but its

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time increased significantly by 2001, reaching a peak of 31

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peak, Ford's

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dropped significantly, finishing the

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at around 21

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per

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. As for the Japanese firms, Toyota and Honda remained more stable. Both began the

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requiring 22

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per

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both experienced a slight increase in

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time in 2002 (peaking at 24

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), they ultimately improved their efficiency to reach a joint low of 20

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per

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by 2005.

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made them the most time-efficient producers throughout almost the entire timeframe.

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Single idea per paragraph

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